wow... very, very very good...

amazing how poems or songs just come from an image or something in our lives, isnt it?

cool, very cool..

I love this one -- absolutely fabulous. It is bitter, but it doesn't seem angsty. I love your metaphor -- it's unique and gets your point across wonderfully. Just do me a favor and write out your 7 years as seven years (sorry; I know it's picky, pet peeve!)? Lovely. =)

Great imagery here! I love the concept and the way you wrote it and everything. *awards gold star* Nice work!

What oath was this?

Reading the almost invisble accusations would be hard. But the mirror oath you had made could not have shattered the mirror. Only the body can. There can not be such thing as worse luck, opposed to bad luck is there? Well if there is I'm staying away from the mirrors for a while!

It was cold but it was really good. And that isn't rare for me to say!

Cheers, Dani

Darkness triumphs again. It truly shines out in this porm--as much as darkness can possibly shine. The poems that take their own tones as they progress are the best ones, I think. That's how I write my best stuff. Anyway, nice job.

The last lines bring it to a crashing end--those are my favorite. They manage to sum it all up for me.

Twas a good poem, and i also liked how you mirrored your request for reviews...nice touch...anywho...great job...

~TheBrokenWanderer~