|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| WarriorHeart 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseI love the last four lines... the way you set them up; the puncuate clearly in the reader's (well at least my) mind, kind of communicatind the sense that you do want someone to see the real you and want you still. Nice job. |
| imjuzakyd 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThat's... depressing. The last few lines, I mean. Not being able to find someone who could understand the real you. Sigh. So sad. =( |
| something agaisnt you 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abusethis poem made me feel almost squeemish to read, not because i didn't like it, it just seemed to much like a situation i have been in, it could have been longer but then i guess the shortness of it expresses the hesitation of the writer in expressing their feelings, a really good poem overall. |
| Nianko 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI relate...I've tried to write something like this,but I enver found the right words.It's a nicepoem and you are a good writer...Keep up the good work. NK |