Well, that was definitely an interesting story. Very original and I really enjoyed the comedy of it. Particularly Mara gloating in the afterlife. ^-^ Great job.

Umm... 'ahem'... very strangely weird... uhh... what do I say? Most interesting, definately, and... err... the poor bird! Shackled by ashes of the dead?! Great visual... but... *shivers*... awesome...

Yeah, interesting little er... fic, i do hope you continue... though... from what to where i'm not entirely sure... good read, though! ^_^