Original and creatively written. Not just another stone in the pond. Very clear portrayal of your feeling and the short lines and struture lend themselves to breathless, intense feeling. Nice work I must say.

Also, holy mother but you have tons of reviews.

Ohh gosh. I see where your penname came from. This is good. "I hear it/The silent siren call/I touch it/The silver reflects all" - simply haunting. The simplicity in this one just brought out overwhelming yearning for a knife and the pain that comes with it beautifully. Excellent work! [But please please don't carry out what you're describing here! *puppydog eyes*]

Wow, this is amazing! Excellent work; keep writing! I can't wait to read more from you!

Also! Thanks for reviewing me... your awesome review for 'Inspiration' made me feel good! _

Keep writing!

Anna

*hisses* maggie... what have i said before? It was good but deep... You better have stopped...

Now why do you think i wrote stop dieing hm?

anyway it was good, i wonder what nach has to sayLove you sis, Dani

Wow. I've never before read something written quite like this and I loved it. That really was amazing. Well done.

This is good. I spent the whole poem trying to work out when you wanted, and then marvelled at the work when I reached the end. This really is a top class piece.

Matt