very good-intense and interesting-i don't think there is anything more i can say bout ur writing that i haven't already. love it as always and touches me deeply.

~kara~

This is interesting. Well written, and very deep. Thoughts were heavy, in a positive manner.

Continue it.

Always, †A.A.†

That was nice. I liked the lack of praragraphs and just a bunch of sentences. It showed her indecision really well. Good job ^_~

~Max W.~

Aww... that is so sad and depressing,... and... true! Wow... very powerfully written, very sad... but very, very good. I like it a lot! You should really continue this! ^_^