You got heart buddy, I remember writing poems like this. This shows character, and shows how much of a good guy you are.

thnx for Reviewing my work! and its a really great poem! =D

So romantic... I envy you. Good use of repetition.

hey i read this story before...i needed to get on your acount means i dont have one

A very sentimental poem! Love the repetition..I really brings back lots of memories.. Good work!

I like this.. the repition is awesome.. I like it a lot.. i can relate to a lot of this.. nice job

Wow! I really like the imagery and the feeling in this poem. Thank you for writing this. This is exactly how I feel about my boyfriend.

Such a sad poem. It brings certain memories to mind for me. Its so sad about the past, even our happy memories bring us sadness because we realize those memories will never be again... this kinda depresses me, you've done a good job. There's a lot of talent here, great work. Keep it up.