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| Bek 2005-11-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseYou need to update |
| Draco Letty 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseHmm how should I begin... its a good story no bout about that, and the cliffy was nice, and only one grammer mistake from what I saw (a word was missing from a sentence) but that wasn't nothing big. The thing is... the story seems slightly odd for some reason I can't place, maybe it was written to be like that or maybe its just because I have been working on and reading stories in a different genre for a while now and popping in on this one caught me by surprise I dunno. I know one thing though, its a good story and I will be expecting an update soon, I wanna know what happened! -Draco Letty, Author of Shijin The Assassin |