ooh, this one was a cool one too... i really need to set up a fictionpress account...

let's see... very nice, you build a nice climax and then it all falls away...very dramatic!! me gusta!!

ack, footsteps!! must fly...

it's bizarre, but i know actually what you mean.

There's this certain scent I get from my basement, and sometimes I'll smell that same thing somewhere else, and be like, am I home?

anyways, muy excellente. You need to continue with the poetry my friend. You are gifted.

hey stalker! that was really cool! i can really relate. thanks for the review :)

~Tom with the Weather

YES! i have actually.. woww i can completely and utterly relate :) this was really great.