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| Lakoria 2005-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really awesome. It reminded me of all the times I just kinda sit outside and look at the stars. It's just so cool what God has placed in the sky as a testomony. You really do do a good job at poetry. I would love to read some more. Keep it up! I also think you're right. I don't remember Hook having a parrot eirther, but I couldn't think of anything else to put. lol So yeah, thanks for the review! God bless, Lakoria |
| black*tears*of*innocence 2005-11-03 ch 1, | abusewow, yeah. this is great. there are tons of awesome things to see when you stare at the sky. its so amazing. like the clouds, the birds. or, at night, the moon and all the stars. have you tried counting them? i have. i got to 30 then i lost track. oh well, i thought i'd try. alrighty then. good job on this. KW! ~davida |
| Suicidal Skies 2005-09-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is simplisticly pleasing. ^-^ Thanks for the review!) |
| marshbar960 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abusedon't mind what others think...in fact, the world would be a wonderful place if we just stop everything and take a look at God's creation. anyway, thanks for sharing and keep writing! p.s. God loves you and so do I! |