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miss-blackhair 2005-11-06 ch 1,	abusenot your best piece? you cracked?? it was awesome, really. i like the part when ree sucked her blood. very very nice. almost as nice as spike from buffy sucked people blood. boy, that was so cool! LOL. the characters are totally great and the plot, yeah! =)
Jaeiyola 2005-09-21 ch 1,	abuseI like it very much. Didn't really like Katrina, a snob to me. But Jane on the other hand is fine. I'm glad Ree is fine with Jane.
Lady Katreina 2005-09-13 ch 1,	abuseIt is still pretty good.
LyLTiArApRiNcEsS 2005-09-12 ch 1,	abuseYou like vampires don't you? Anyways...it was great but why do all the pretty ones get picked on? LoL. Awesome chapter.
Devonshirelass 2005-09-11 ch 1,	abuseI thought this was great, I liked the twist! A great entertaining read! It's a shame you have not decided to add to it!
cdr1687 2005-09-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseOkay that was really weird. Was he like a vampire? That's what I was guessing because of the blood. Strange, but good in a way.
anon 2005-09-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow that was great. I'd have never guess that he was a vampire! Too bad this was only a one-shot, but oh well, it was still pretty good.
rachel 2005-09-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseThe girl is fat!? Good story. I always reveiw your stories.. ^
miss understanding 2005-09-09 ch 1,	abuseHahaha. The evil Katrina must die. I really like this as a one shot. It has a nice moral too: don't act like a ** in front of hot guys because they are most likely a vampire. jk. Seriously, I really like the 'be a good person' moral because they have deeper meaning that courses deeper than plot. Right and wrong are subjective. It's the type of person that you choose to be that counts. Ah, look at me. All 'poetical'. This is a great one shot. I hope he didn't kill Jane.
WiltingBlackRose 2005-09-09 ch 1,	abuseO...this story is quite unpredictable so far. Awesome, I like it. Are you going to continue it or is this all?

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