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Als 2006-11-29 . chapter 1
This song is really bittersweet. I like it. Because it has both a down feel to it, but it's also hopeful it seems.
"You want to find who you are
And I want to find my heart
I hope that this is worth it
I hope that we “Come back…
Stronger than we ever were before” "

Those have got to be my favorite lines. And I hope they come true...
Luv,
Als
Faerie. 2005-09-10 . chapter 1
Another sad song, but it's SO beautiful.
Seth T 2005-09-09 . chapter 1
this was really good, not as good as the other one though. It seemed like something I would write lol. good job!
darkpaladin13 2005-09-09 . chapter 1
I have a few ideas about what/who this is about . . . I liked it . . . kinda seems like a balladish/acoustic song. Good piece. Has a nice flow, nice rhythm . . .really nicely done.
Nimnengil Parmanole 2005-09-09 . chapter 1
That'a a really good song! Very well done. and i think i understand what it's about. "And my breath stoppedThe first time you said goodbye" good lines!
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