The stories are quite interesting and detailed for being so short. I commend you on your imagery and humor, not many I know can pull that of (me included). Have you ever tried writing a 50 word story? If you have the time, mind critiquing some of my work?

You haven't updated in such a long time, I was starting to lose hope.

I love this though, the first sentence is awkward as was some of the description. The last line just cracks me up though.

I like it. Awesome job. I like the last 'chapter', Eccentric, the best.

Yeah, we all have our little bits and pieces of writing...yours just happen to be great!

Now that's punny.

Besides the fact that you used strange twice in the first paragraph, I liked this peice.

Kiwi's are really yummy. You should buy me one

I have a dog named Autumn.

Anyways I like the first few lines, but I'm not as fond of the middle. Glad to see you've updated finally

wow, some truely anti-angst, you actually dared to write about feeling good, that took some courage.It is well written and your words convey the feelings perfectly. I like it. DC

Now, that last bit was especially harsh Drake, but none the less conveyed the point. YOu really do need to stop feeling bad for your characters, killing them off is always more pleasurable when its...pleasurable

Obessive Complusive much?

Anyways, this one was cool, because the figuring out who moved them and if they had been touched is a trait I sort of posess. Its not bad writing for ten minutes either, gives us a lot of insight to the character ina very short time. Bravo

I like this beginning! Very nice!

By the way, I am Tiger_Stripes163. It's 6 in the morning, I don't have to goto school for another 3 or so hours, SO! I decided to read your work! Yay!

I am an inspiration? I am but honored. Although, if I ruled the rule I would be empresses, and there would be me and like, twenty other people.

On to the story. A very creative approach for writing about freedom, my favorite of these prompts yet.

Both characters were well done, although you did spend a lot of description on the girl's looks at first. Overall though, very nice

So short.

You started two paragraphs with Amaya, something you might want to consider changing. Overall, I thought it was great.Although I am a little confused about the placing. Hes tied from the above balcony, but is in her apartment? My mind probably isn't working

Like cool this first prompt is how I'm feeling at this exact moment. Absolutley true. Well described.

This the "Talk about your city" one?Eh, this one isn't so good. You start out, and the first paragraph is strong, the second one needs mucho improvment

I liked the prose better then the poem myself. But really, these are much better then you said they would be