I really like how you emphasise the fact tht she canj't get him out of her mind even when he's being what you'd call an asshole.

Sounds like a broken heart to me. Happens to the best of us. I like how you mixed it with skating.

I have definately felt like that before. I like it, so calm and a little sad...it's good.

I like how you managed to make it quite poetic.

Quite interesting. I could actually see you extending this into a story somehow, but that's just my opinion.

if these r abt ur life i'm so sorry! we're alike actually in the respect that our hearts keep breaking