   Silveralsa 2008-04-17 . chapter 1Very nice interplay of words, I think you convey the attitude behind it well! |
 I*-*am*-*Eskimo 2005-12-04 . chapter 1Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. (Triple Awesome! Cheyah!) -*-Eskimo-*- (Author of the Avery stories! With a new name...) |
| The-unimportant-item 2005-10-06 . chapter 1 ... wow... i really like it... |
| Ildri 2005-09-10 . chapter 1 ...wow...that's a really good poem......ya know, you still need to review me. |
| Beautifula 2005-09-09 . chapter 1 Intense and blunt. I liked it. You formatted it well too. |
 Beauty From Pain 2005-09-09 . chapter 1Wow. Beautiful. |
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