aww glad you improved your life! the grammar was a little problematic but since this was more a kind of piece "from the heart" as they say...it doesn't matter too much. nice one, i like your postscript. :)

this story has a really good moral, your spelling needs a little work in places, but i would recommend adding to it, make it a longer story, maybe include more details of the Josh, and what happened after she quit that school. I really love this so i hope you would add more.