Oh my...that was so hot...it turned me on like hell...I'm dripping wet now...

This was hot, plain and simple.

got me hot! loved it. you should add more.

Honey... I must say that I think i laughed my ** off... she tried to ** her cat... OMG! Now, I have six cats and that seems like a very, very hard thing to do... Poor cat... It must be so scarred. I rather like this story, it's funny. Proves men, in whatever situation are weak. I normally don't read het, but I found this rather funny!-Fiona

Good thing I don't have a cat, or I might get ideas...nah, just kidding. The whole concept of this story was great. I've just gotta say..you've gotta be pretty talented to seduce a priest. Pretty talented, or pretty hot.

Anyway, just that I'd say this was pretty good, I liked it, and I'm reviewing because I'm not a wuss.

xoxox

nice. disturbing...but oh so very hot. she's got a clergy-fetish! and the dialogue made it so much better.

AH! UPDATE! I LOVE THIS!! HOPE FOR YOU TO READ MY STORY!

I found the confession cringingly hilarious. I am an athiest yet the balsphemous ocntent of your story makes me blush.

It is intriguing and provocative, a taboo. I agree with some of the reveiws about the characters needing for depth. But for a first chapter, it's caught my attention...actually the summary caught my attention. It would be interesting to see how this progresses.

Andrea

nice i really like

I was laughing my ** off at that confession. Good work.

You know I find it funny how many people actually read this story because of your summary, and yet around 90% of them won't review because they're 'worried' what others might think of them reading something like this. Cowards I say!

Anyway I'm not into the whole seductive drama, though i tend to write the odd fic once and a while, this was rather enjoyable. There were a few spelling errors and such, but nothing to detract from the story.

The only thing I could say was the formatting seemed a little distorted. It would have been better if you broke down the paragraphs each time a person spoke.

Also the actual sex act could use a bit more emotion, maybe it's me but preiest put up a half assed effort to resist his demons.

Alexiel seemed a little one dimensional. She laid out all her cards with little hesitation, and really brought herself down as the story progressed.

I'm not here to flame I wasn't offended by this, it would take a hell of a lot more. I enjoyed this story as a good read, issues withstanding.

Keep up the nice work, maybe a few of other hundred people who read this after me may actually review and not be afraid their 'loyal fans' saw that they read this. ...Gotta love humans so funny creatures.

Wow... That was great. It's up to you if you wanna write more. Sex in a church...with a preist, great. Just G R E A T

*grins* I don't think I understand this fascination for seducing priests... I think a few too many people have watched 'Quills'!

In all honesty, this came across as a little trash-porny to me, more than anything else. Didn't offend me in the slightest, but still, wasn't the best of writing. And the priest - well - he was just rather weak, wasn't he? Maybe this is your way of making a statement on society and its hypocricy through rigidly upheld religion and its downfall in lack of concession through its lack of equality for both sexes.

anyway... '** my cat' was so extreme i snorted into my drink.

I know that I'll probably get flamed but that's the beauty of it. People take things too seriously. Oh and I read all of my reviews on every story. Thank you, though. ^^

You're SO burning in hell. :p Anyway, I actually wanted to comment on your poem 'Wicked Pleasure' because it's really beautiful, but I thought you wouldn't get around to seeing the review as it's one of your older poems. Or further down on the list anyway. "My love...I do not deserve you." is fabulous. I've felt that too. Some of your other poetry and *COUGH COUGH* stories about PRIESTS are a little disturbing but I admire your courage to put it up here. You're gonna get flamed though. :pYours,~Beckie