Wow, I just love your tall lengths of the poems you write. "Its actions you abhor" Is abhor a word becuase I do not know if it is or isn't. I can serioiusly relate: evidence: most of my poems. Wow, great job with kissing the emotions in.

liKE I've told you before, I really like it! You're a great writer!! It's a beautiful poem =]

b.e.a.utiful...hee heenice, sad, heartrenching tear jerking......now i need a tissue...lol, me want more!

Ooh, very good! I didin't know you had fictionpress stories too! Wow, xangas are very useful, eh? Well, I like the poem, nice and descriptive... Do you feel this way? Deep... this may be short, but it's early and I'm tired. I'm off to read the next poem.