when someone tells us they don't like us, we can take it one of two ways. we can take it on board and get all upset and dwell on it, or, we can say okay, that is okay, not everyone has to like me. I know I am loved.good writing. keep it up

interesting story... I like the rhyming

I understand, it's a great poem.

I like it. It's really good. Shows the hurt/mad emotions pretty well. Nice work. ^_^

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