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| shola 2006-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseIt'd work as a song. That's so cool. I really can't do song-like words, and this reads just so musically. AGain really well developed, I love the imagery used, and the way you slowly build up a sense of panic and despair without it sounding like a rant. I like it |
| concentric circles 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abusei like this a lot, albeit it may be depressing, i feel as if it is hopeful as well. it also sounds like a good song. |
| Anomally 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuseYou are my idle... marry me. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abusePerfect end. Really stuck with me. |
| Billthegeek 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abuseThis one of the coolest angst poem I've ever read here. i like the language used. |