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Scared-stiff-
2008-04-21
ch 20,
abusehey i read this whole thing in 2 days! I luv it so far,please update
LilwenKeitha
2008-04-09
ch 20,
abuseI don't like Jeff at all, he needs to get his feelings straight. First he hurts Thomas, then he's in love with him. I'm thoroughly convinced that he's mentally unstable.

But i like the story. I also feel bad for Jude, he seems like a good person. But yet he always seems to be the one that looses when it comes to dear Thomas. keep up the good work.
SerialXLain
2008-03-25
ch 20,
abuseHm. I don't think I liked this chapter as much as I liked the previous ones. o.o Some of it seemed just...kind of different. I don't know how to explain how, though. Sorry. o.o

But I like that Thomas and his mom actually talked, and I always love just how poetic your writing is. :)

xo
Rachizzle
2008-03-01
ch 20, anon.
abuse:) Amazing, as usual. I love tear-jerkers. gogo!
stve3
2008-02-28
ch 20, anon.
abuseNo you can't stop there! Now I have to know what happens next! Brilliant as always!
bambi4real
2008-02-25
ch 20, anon.
abuseI am not sure what to make of this. I think I got impatient wiht the flowery language but I definitely felt his angst there. i keep waiting for when he gets happy with no strings attached. :)
Crazy Moogle
2008-02-24
ch 20,
abuseI just started reading your story today and now I'm done. You're an amazing writer! I've never read a story where the character's seem so real and believable. The first few chapters made me cry. Poor Thomas! I'm really looking forward to what you got in store for us in next chapter. I kind of get the feeling that Jude played a big part in Elise's rapid change of personality. Also, for some reason I like Jeff. Don't know why though.
BlackWolfCub
2008-01-14
ch 19,
abusemy god this is good i love it it is so sad. keep it up keep it up. i wish there was more, def going to put this and you in my favourites
stve3
2007-12-15
ch 19, anon.
abuseIt's been a while since I checked for updates and i'm really really glad to know you haven't given up on this story because it's brilliant! Every chapter I read i find myself completely engrossed! The revelations of Jude being Jeff's brother and Elise being in love with him! ( I was always sure it was Jeff himself) It came as a shock! Jeff's feelings for Thomas don't surprise me since his obsession was clear. But it was done so well... I'm not making much sense now...

All I'll say is please pretty please update soon!
merrymowmow
2007-12-05
ch 19,
abuseI was wondering when you're going to update?
SerialXLain
2007-11-10
ch 19,
abuseAwesome chapter. There were a lot of really cool surprises. :O Especially that one with Jeff at the end. Wow.

I really love your writing... There's something so real but so poetic about it. :)

Once again. Awesome job...and sorry it took me so long to review.

xoxoxo
uniqueindividual
2007-11-08
ch 19,
abusethe angst is killing me, but I want more
Aoi Mitsuko
2007-10-11
ch 19,
abuseI don't think I've ever read something as truly heartbreaking as this. And I mean it in the best way possible, of course. It's an AMAZING piec of work, and it makes you feel so completely and uttlery human. And loneliness like it's never been felt before.

The way you write, you get the emotion across so well, it it just, kind of resonates? It's just, amazing. How you can get the feeling across. And it's so, so sad. But it's so natural, and so true at the same time.

I really, really can't wait for the next update! This will definitley go in my favorites XD
bambi4real
2007-10-07
ch 19,
abusei really liked the last scene with Jeff it was gripping.
Rachizzle
2007-10-03
ch 19, anon.
abuseHaha, as I said, I loved this chapter. And really, I'm not courageous, it's pretty easy correcting it, there's really no mistakes it's just that I switch words around a bit so it makes more sense. xP
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