I really hope you keep to your word and finish the second part because there are still a lot of questions left unanswered...like the pictures, jeff, jude, what happened to elise...?

Great Story...i just really hope you finish the second part soon...i just dont understand why it will take u untill august to finish this story, i mean its not like the first part was that long.

I really do love the way u write...post soon!

One word: WOW!

Thats all I can say about this Chapter! LOL

Best Chapter so far.lol
I love the angst...you write it so well!

This was a very beautiful story and I especially enjoyed the ending. I'm going to go check for part two now, and if it isn't up then I'll just have to wait for it and urge you to keep on writing. Great job!

Hey,

First of, this story is amazing, I feel so sorry for rowan, I just wanna dive him a hug. The twists and turns are great too. By the by, this was translated from French yeh?, you've done a great job, you can hardly tell. I hope you get the next one out soon.

Thankies!!

i cant believe someone spat on his face! he goes to the shittiest school ever! poor boy!

wow im hooked. i especially liked the last line. It was so sad! i hope the story has a happy ending! (kind of) :)

GAR THIS STORY IS SO DEPRESSING. but thats why its good so its cool. but omg. jeff is such a sick fuck. D: aka hesa really good character. elise is so innocent and cute and gaah. i hate how she died. her balloon wish made me cry. literally. in real life. and god i hate his parents. especially his dad. hesa jerk. D: except not because he feel guilty too. ughslkdfjslkjflksdjflksdjf. jude was cool in the beginning until elise liked jude . then it went down the drain from there. but thats why this story is so awesomesaucemcoolioyogurtpotatoesfrenchfrypickletacoburrito. supercalifragilisticexpialidocious. idk.

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why did i die

Haha, thanks much for forgiving me. When i get around to it, I plan on re-reading the whole story. xP

wow... what do the picture's show? Im gonna take a guess and say she was raped and jeff took pictures of it...


does this mean thomas will end up with jude?

too many dead people!

WHA? God damn update this immediately!

:( This chapter made me cry a little...


But I love your writing. There's something about it that's really...poetic. I'm pretty sure I've said this before, but that's because I love it that much. :3


Can't wait to read the end though I'm sad it's come. :o

xo

This story makes me sad, yet i love it.

Wahaha pea in his nut sounds so french XD

Naaw I thought he was gonna get raped! Too bad haha

I like this, the short sentences create a nice speed and a lot of suspense and I can't stop reading!

WOW, Jeff is an incrdibally confusing character! I keep thinking I managed to understand him only to realize I still have no idea! I can't help but feel his letter was bullshit- I can't believe all he did to Thomas was just because he liked to toy with people and ,to me, him killing himself proves there was much more to it. Poor Thomas... never gets a break! I'm assuming the photos are of Jeff and Elise? I'm really looking forward to seeing what you plan on doing next!