OMG. I love this poem! It's so cute!! Haha this is like me when I was about to make out for the first time. I was like "AH I don't know WHAT I'm doing!" but then it happened and I was like "hah that was easy!" Lol. I love poems that remind the reader of their own expiriences. It makes the poem seem more real. Bravo. *adds to favorites*

i repeat, i love you. Ah, my first kiss...excellent poem..

-Shasta Valentine

aw this is so cute...wow.

I wasn't sure I was going to like this, expecting another 'how to' poem, but the emotion depicted and thrown at the reader really helped this one along, particularly when you didn't go into the science of kissing, but merely that 'the lips know what to do'. Good read after all!

I agree...it comes naturally^_^Another good poem o'romance perfectionist, lol^_^

I'm not really one for romantic fuzzy stuff. However, this is cute. I've never been kissed before but I like this though. It's really cute.

that's Cutsey! I like it, the ideas behind it! i love it! lol... did you do that, or did you just toss ideas off the top of your head? it's a jolly idea, i might just go try it ;)I like the lines and the rhythm, very cool

Aw, how cute. This is so sweet. There's only one itty bitty problem: sleepness nights. I think you meant sleepless nights but whatever. The poem itself is vair cute!

Much Love,

S. A. Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu

hmm, I didn't like it sorry. I found it detached, and slightly cold. No idea why, maybe it's just me.

wow