I admit, they have a lot of sex. But its still very good! You have excellent writing technique. There are a few typos, but none to complain about too much. :-D

sunflowersing

I

LOVED

YOUR

IMAGERY.

You've got a good knack for it. I liked how I could read this love scene and could enjoy that it was ROMANCE... not smutty crap that just depicts the whole "get-in-and-get-out" theory, ya know? This was fresh, and I really did like it.

Isn't it so lovely, though, when a vamp and mortal make love? It's like the assimilation of Good & Evil, Life & Death. So sweet.


~ARS

So friggin horny, it's annoying... but it's otay... I'll live (I hope...) lol...

Love,Lia

P.S. It's so good! you have to continue this series and I'll work on the companions to these! Also your story is up!