   Noetic 2006-04-11 . chapter 3Wow... I guess if poetry and fantasy ever ran away together, this would be their lovechild *g* |
| Learah Kaelar 2005-11-10 . chapter 3 Really cool! I like this chapter the best,I think...The narration of this is beautiful, only one thing though: In the last sentence, 'when I started to become goddess' could possibly use an 'a' between become and goddess...
Keep it up! Oh, and I'm going to put up a new story later today, 'Emotionless', if you want to read it!
Blessed be! |
| CerriC 2005-11-02 . chapter 3 Wo, I liked this chapter. We're getting a lot more of the world now - which is really cool, btw - and the style was wonderful! The narrator's voice was consistent and compelling. Great chapter. |
| Learah Kaelar 2005-10-30 . chapter 2 I'm starting to understand this better. Your writing is very mysterious-sounding...it's really cool! Hurry and write more! (sorry, I think that might be a wee bit hypocritical, considering how long it's been since I've put something new up...) |
| Learah Kaelar 2005-10-30 . chapter 1 A short chapter, perhaps, but a good one anyway. You could possibly spend some time explaining a few more things in this chapter, such as what exactly is going on...because I sort of understand, but not quite...maybe if I read it again...
Blessed be! |
| RegulusPure 2005-09-13 . chapter 2 I'm interested in where this story will go. It seems very fantasy heavy, and perhaps a bit complex for the common mind to comprehend. I'll do my best, as I am perhaps as common as anyone. =] Keep writing. |
| leylakedi 2005-09-13 . chapter 1 whoaa that was weird and confusing and...can't think of the word...Intriging!! (if i spelled it right) Good start!
-L- |
| CerriC 2005-09-11 . chapter 2 I'm loving the concept behind this. It seems like you have an interesting plot coming along as well. I can't wait to read more about Slights and how they interract with normal people. I found it amusing that sleep is her only reprieve from dreaming. Like I said, eagerly awaiting more. |
| CerriC 2005-09-10 . chapter 1 This was really interesting. I think I'll reread it later when I have more time to enjoy it. The idea seems like a really unique concept, but I'll reserve my opinions until I see where you're taking it. |
| bunnyrabbit228 2005-09-10 . chapter 1 Interesting story, I like your word choice, confusing at parts but overall well written.
-bunnyrabbit228 |
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