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Bloody AMAZING! :D
Not much to say except well done, because that was an awesomely cute story! :)

it sounds like a beginning of a story but I think it is good as a 'BLOODY FUCKING ONESHOT' , because it is just the story how they get to know each other and get closer and interested in each other. I liked it!

aww, really sweet ) and it was perfect as a one-shot, the feeling of the story would have been ruined if it were too long. anyways, thank you for putting a smile on my face -

is... is that it O.O NU i was being to love them! :(

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Short, sweet, to the point, with nothing complicated to drag it out or screw it up. Just what I want from a oneshot.

This is so adorable! I love the little things that Max does for Ryan - the coffee, picking him up for work... I need to get a guy like that for myself!

Loved it, cute :)

Aw, adorable. Max and Ryan are so cute and humorous. I love it. Nice job. :D

YAY! Another adorable story. To bad it's a oneshot. It's so cute!

You should expand on the oneshot and make it a short story.

Otherwise, its a great oneshot.

very good work!

I agree with Seath - that's mean. You can be polite and say no sequel. Looking at the reviews you'd have thought 100 people asked the same question. You should be thankful, people even bother to reply.

On another note. It's a nice story.

XDD FREAKING AWESOME. I love Ryan, I really do. :3 He sounds hot. The story is really realistic too.. like the reactions an everything, you know? Really awesome.

Aw..Don't trash the Camero! Lol. Another great story!