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| Lidyah 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI agree with Seath - that's mean. You can be polite and say no sequel. Looking at the reviews you'd have thought 100 people asked the same question. You should be thankful, people even bother to reply. On another note. It's a nice story. |
| rivalovery 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseXDD FREAKING AWESOME. I love Ryan, I really do. :3 He sounds hot. The story is really realistic too.. like the reactions an everything, you know? Really awesome. |
| Prisoner-11 2006-03-11 ch 1, | abuseAw..Don't trash the Camero! Lol. Another great story! |
| Espantalho 2006-03-01 ch 1, | abuseI would just like to say that this story makes me giddy every time I read it ;) You're talented. Great job! This is on my favorites ;) |
| taeguk 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI would like to say I very much liked this story. :) I also very much liked how you ended it--sometimes the narrative seemed a bit stilted, but I enjoyed it! |
| Nothing Profound 2005-09-29 ch 2, | abuseJesus, I didn't realize it was a 'bloody ** one-shot.' Do forgive me for reviewing your story. |
| Seath 2005-09-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseYou didn't have to be bitchy about it, they're just giddy little people who want more of a great story. Either way, it was a good read, if not a bit of a cliff hanger, which is good consdering that you could pick it up if you wanted. A review where people actually STILL take the time to say that they enjoyed it is better than nothing at all - be thankful. |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-09-20 ch 2, | abuseI sounded incridibly idiotic and I'm sorry...I would like to see more of those two, so if you ever feel inspired to write another one-shot **hint hint**..you know what, ignore that last sentence. The story had a great ending, and I loved it. |
| Queen of the Jazzed 2005-09-19 ch 2, | abuseThis doesn't seem as though it has closure, so I am just going to hope and pray that you continue it. ^_^ If not, I suppose I'll live, and just read the beginning again and again. It'll do, le hmph. |
| pneumothorax 2005-09-19 ch 2, | abuseI am reviewing to agree,a nd to praise somewhat more. And to smugly point out that I am none of those you mentioned. I do like what you've written. It's quite simple & although not my favourite, is easily worthy of my time. |
| orbicland 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseSo, turns out I was a moron and forgot to review this. I can't figure out why, because it was the best. I particularly like how Max is so kind but you know he has an ulterior motive. I am always a big fan of your characters' interaction, but especially in this because there is no big 'omg we are misunderstanding!' and there doesn't need to be cos the plot just... goes. Also, I like how you utilise the red-of-face bits. |
| Zeva 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseThe detail is...wow. I really, really liked it. Jewel was so funny! I usually don't like plain fluff, but this was good.~sword_dancer23 (aka Hali) |
| hesfb 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseoh isnt this a cute story! two guys and a puppy! and dancing! oh and look a great big lump of fluff! haha i loved it. so sweet. :):) thumbs up. i really like your one shots. theyre tres good :):) |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseAww, that's adorable! I was smiling all along..heheh..I would like to see more of those two..so..will you please write more about them? |
| Nothing Profound 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseWhen are you going to update this adorable story? |