Aw, adorable. Max and Ryan are so cute and humorous. I love it. Nice job. :D

YAY! Another adorable story. To bad it's a oneshot. It's so cute!

You should expand on the oneshot and make it a short story.
Otherwise, its a great oneshot.

very good work!

I agree with Seath - that's mean. You can be polite and say no sequel. Looking at the reviews you'd have thought 100 people asked the same question. You should be thankful, people even bother to reply.

On another note. It's a nice story.

XDD FREAKING AWESOME. I love Ryan, I really do. :3 He sounds hot. The story is really realistic too.. like the reactions an everything, you know? Really awesome.

Aw..Don't trash the Camero! Lol. Another great story!

I would just like to say that this story makes me giddy every time I read it ;) You're talented. Great job! This is on my favorites ;)

I would like to say I very much liked this story. :) I also very much liked how you ended it--sometimes the narrative seemed a bit stilted, but I enjoyed it!

Jesus, I didn't realize it was a 'bloody ** one-shot.' Do forgive me for reviewing your story.

You didn't have to be bitchy about it, they're just giddy little people who want more of a great story.

Either way, it was a good read, if not a bit of a cliff hanger, which is good consdering that you could pick it up if you wanted.

A review where people actually STILL take the time to say that they enjoyed it is better than nothing at all - be thankful.

I sounded incridibly idiotic and I'm sorry...I would like to see more of those two, so if you ever feel inspired to write another one-shot **hint hint**..you know what, ignore that last sentence. The story had a great ending, and I loved it.

This doesn't seem as though it has closure, so I am just going to hope and pray that you continue it. ^_^

If not, I suppose I'll live, and just read the beginning again and again. It'll do, le hmph.

I am reviewing to agree,a nd to praise somewhat more. And to smugly point out that I am none of those you mentioned. I do like what you've written. It's quite simple & although not my favourite, is easily worthy of my time.

So, turns out I was a moron and forgot to review this. I can't figure out why, because it was the best. I particularly like how Max is so kind but you know he has an ulterior motive. I am always a big fan of your characters' interaction, but especially in this because there is no big 'omg we are misunderstanding!' and there doesn't need to be cos the plot just... goes. Also, I like how you utilise the red-of-face bits.