Great. This was just...beautiful. I can almost hear it as a low whisper inside my head. Really, really good.

i like ur descriptions of everything...this is also another good poem!

wow, tearfully sad and vivid imagery~ good work

keep writing!

very powerful. gets the message across. It's also sad and gives me a sense of unhopefulness (probably not a word, but all well). No matter what the person does nothing will help them until they give in and cut themselves which they seem sort of in denial about doing.(the right words seem to not be coming to me today).

OMG! this is the saddest and quite upsetting poem i hav ever read. the atmosphere is captured perfectly and altho its quite long, its awesome. im not a cutting/scarred wrists kinda person but i can sorta understand this. its filled with regret and sorrow but its well written. great job:-)

~ang/mez aka funkyflower14