 Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-31 . chapter 1The details of this poem made me flinch back a little, which I guess (for you) is a good thing. =P You literally evoked a reaction from your reader.
The last two lines struck out me, probably for personal reasons. I'm a huge animal lover (on vacation I went around seeking flamingos and chickens and peacocks to feed), and I like to think they love me back. It's a little hurtful to think about the truth, but those two lines are amazing. They're so simple and yet really touch me.
Amazing work. You really are a talented writer. |