|Reviews for Mary's Tears|
| Aria-Starle 1/28/07 . chapter 1
aren't people supposed to pray to god too? or is he just ignored now that jesus has come?
| His Mercy's Waiting 9/11/05 . chapter 1
Wow. I can just imagine Mary saying this. And it's so sad how people worship Mary...when all along only Jesus can save them.
| el pobre borracho 9/10/05 . chapter 1
Who knew Christ best? Other than His father - it was his mother, yes? Why wouldn't you look to her, as an example of how to follow Jesus; she was the first Christian, the first to say 'yes' to the message of the Gospel.
Anyhow, I like some of your poem - though at points it seems preachy, rather than descriptive, heart-felt.
I'd ask you to think about the 'can't hear me' bit. No one with any education PRAYS to Mary, as in gives her the glory reserved for the creator alone. But she is worthy of respect, don't you think? as the Mother of God. Pictures, statues...they're put up like we put up photographs of loved ones. Why shouldn't she hear us? If she's died, she lives now in heaven with her Son; not deaf, not gone.
...I went dissertative - hopefully not too much, on a poem. If I'm unclear, feel free to email. Or if not, I hope you'll think about it.
Probably you're not Catholic?