drama is just pure lies. I love the emptiness here - there's so much going on but at the same time it's completely pointless. The last three lines are incredibly good.

you caught the sense of subject very well here, and the aloneness in the end is completely fitting. love how you showed how cheap and unoriginal that shallow world can be, and how people lose so much by setting themselves on high...excellent. i've missed your words.

mezzie

Nice! I really liked this one. And it was less confusedly metaphorical than you tend to be. Not that that's necessarily bad, it just tends to take to much work for me to appreciate those, I'm afraid. So- well written, good point.¿

so glamourous yet so very not. i adore that.