Moondog Dozier
2006-02-03
ch 1,   | This work has a really strong and honest voice. You tie the title in so well with the narrative that the details of the individual describe the essence of the title, and yet it seems that the "indoor voice", is something that the character is not completly happy about having to be societally trapped into using. This really is a wonderful work because it gets to the depth of the individual and the introspection that the individual relays to situations, thoughts and feelings. Good work. |
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