this is really cute i like

Aww that was cute...really liked it. Keep writing and thanks for the review. Hey...i ownder where my rag doll is??

Oh! Its a rag-doll. It was so well written that it sounded like a person. Thanks for reviewing!

~MyWhiteRoses~

Well written, well stated.

Keep it up!

Stephen~

Amazing...I can't really say much more but I think that pretty much sums it up.

The poetry is great, but the concept behind it is spectacular. "How else would I have forgotten you" really hits deep.

It's funny how so often we learn of love that we passed by or never saw, when the time is passed, and it can never be fulfilled.

Wow, that is good. Great discription, a clever, original theme. Nicely nostalgic.

Matt

Wow, this is really great. I love the compassion and caring, the hopefulness and happiness. The words touch me, I love this a lot, especially the line, "My initials printed on her heart--" that was really great.

And thanks for the reviews on my stuff =D I look forward to some more from you. You're a very good writer.

beautiful.. I love the ending.. very nice.. tahnks for your reviews

This is a very sweet poem... I think all children have that one object they have to let go, and you've captured the moment and feeling of that perfectly. "Weren't the skies higher here? I seemed so far away from the heavens... Those heavens are now within my reach." Excellent metaphor for something as mundane as a shelf.

Keep it up!

it's scary how alike my writing style is to this poem. I like this a lot...it's just an observation on life, put into elegant words and made beautiful. I like especially:

"Weren't the skies higher here?I seemed so far away from the heavens...Those heavens are now within my reach."

The way you describe a closet shelf as the 'heavens' really strikes my as unique.Wonderful job, keep it up!