Oh, you are so right! I agree with what you say- originality is unique to everyone. :)I love the poem itself- it has a relaxed rhyme scheme which really adds to its structure, and it's, we.., original!Woo hoo!

Love it! It's so special and unique. And nice rhyming scheme. The last 2 lines are so strong! Awesome! It's fantastic!

O my gosh sarah I LOVE IT! Ahyou're such a GREAT poet!

Very true. :):) I liked that a lot, more people in the world should think that way. The poem flowed very well, in my opinion. I like the rhyming. Sort of subtle, but it created a steady rhythm. :)

Keep writing!

- ala :D

Very simple, and the theme isn't anything special, but you generally did an okay job. What I find ironic is the fact that this poem isn't what you're preaching...it's nothing truly original. It would be more effective if it were COMPLETELY for the brutal honesty. I can't help it. :\