i feel so related to this, because i've felt that way so many damn times, its not even funny...lol

WOW! i love it... Its very sad but beautifully written. "devoid of charcoal outlines" lovely use of words.

Hi there, I've been reading through your poetry for the last 45 minutes and I have to say that I think you're an awesome writer with SO much talent! And as for this poem, I really love the emotion coming from this and the way it's written, it's so beautiful! Great job!

Much love, Rosanna.

I like this.. its very bittersweet

Very, very sad. Heart moving all most. I like it.

Awesome, started out sad but ended up great. Keep up the good work - McKenna

came at a perfect imte for me (just had a bad break-up, fp is my therapy) this is really, really beauitful. The imagery and the wording, it's amazing. I love how you wrote this, I honestly do. YOu ocme across so well.