You have some pretty amazing poetry in this mix! If I had to choose 1 poem that I really like its Words. Great stuff! Keep Writing!

Creepily bitter. The format seems almost mocking, as well.

"i pretend to romantisize my pain (but its disgusting. it really is)"

Wonderful lines, right there. Very bitter.

Very clever. For some reason I love the second verse best.

Although "Autopsy Queen" is structured differently from "Dissection Day", I like them both. I think I enjoyed reading this one more, though, because it was simpler and easier to understand, which made the situation more morbid because it was disturbing but told in a rhyming way, which made it sound more playful. (Wow, look at that run-on sentence.) Anyway, the titles of both poems are perfect.♥ I'm glad you updated!

Favorite Line(s): she floats in (not heaven) formaldehyde,/cold and grey on the autopsy table.//she opens up to mechanical coils,/not glitter and rainbows and glass./

Iamgibiacjfjk pethakmermeter? Afraid I haven't heard of that one. :)

This was one of those poems that caught me at the very first line. But the best line (in my opinion) is "blackened with(out velvet but) smoke." I like it. (As usual.)

Wow, I love your style.

It's so unique, and discusting, and worded to eloquently.

I love it!

i liked"formaldehyde kisses"

Wow, that was pretty good. I didn't expect the ending at all. If I can't foresee the ending than I think that is a good story. It was totally unexpected. Usually there's a hero, or someone finds a way to kill the invaders. Way to go. Original.

*shivers* Sometimes your writing freaks me out in an utterly delicious way. Such a good idea; I love it.

so raw, eye-opening, and perfectly pretty.

ack! such prettiness in one poem!

the words you use are so precise & staticstartling. in a good way, of course. i love the way you use rhyme.

+fav

holyshit. this was so amazing. you have such an amazing style of writing, i envy your ability to write this incredible. great great great job.

lovely. it's cruel and kind of sad. it's truthful. i like it.

these are seriously amazing. im going to add you to my faves! i love bird bath best, i think. nice work!