I don't know about a full-on story, but the ending seems kind of... random, almost. I didn't feel that the whole kiss things was quite right.

BRILLIANT :-)

Aww... that was sweet. I think it would be a good idea if you expand this story.

Very cute. If you decide to expand on this (which I hope you do), I'd love to hear more about their relationship prior to the kiss.

aw. liked the last paragraph!

Updates please!

: )

DH

all i can say is how very sweet! this is so cute!

~sam~

It was sweet..:)

BBYD