haha that was amusing. especially the whole stanza. nice job!

style = unique and inspirational. I just love your style, reminds me vaguely of reads like poetry and smile persephone. that could be me though. marevlous work though. I just love it.

~* noelle

Okay...I really don't care for this style. I don't like your little parentheses, but even without them, I wouldn't like the poem. I'm all for feminism, but this wasn't that good.