Couple small grammar/spelling errors. For instance; alittle... you missed the space. [= That sort of thing, nothing that's a real biggie.

"I had got off the track with wobbly legs and grabbed my inhaler, yes I have asthma, once I set it down I noticed him, my teacher, watching me even though I wasnt on the track"

That's a run-on sentence, I'm pretty sure. And you missed the apostrophe (forgive me if I'm being dumb today and my grammar terms are off - wouldn't be a surprise) in wasn't. And it should be "gotten off" not "got.

But otherwise, interesting... there are other small errors that make it a little hard to read, but keep trying. [=

Okay so here goes my review as I read of course, because that's the way like to do it. I have seen this subject wrote many, many, times, so I am hoping this will be diffrent and not like all the rest. That really bugs me when people basically write the same thing in a million stories. I see a few grammar things. The first sentence is a major run on. Know the difference between It's & Its. Commas are important. Keep working on it and I sure you can work out all the kinks.

This definitely has my interest, I hope to see more of it soon! We have a lot of just-out-of-college teachers at my school (that look like they should be students -.-') so I can slightly relate...though, you know, I don't really have a huge crush on them...they're just really really hot...*daydreams* Oh, sorry...anyway, hope you update soon!!

Not bad, but you should probably find a beta reader.

Laura

Nice story. I'd love to see where this goes.

Laura