Well written. I love this. I loved the imagery of 'slipping down a spiral staircase of sorrow' very alliteratted, but well done. Not awkward to read at all, on the contrare, it flows nicely. Well written I say again

wow, the format really worked well to emphasize the poem~ good work

keep writing!

that's cool. I like the fact that almost all started with an s. so sweet!