::Dies from overdose of lovely words:: LOVE! This is so amazing!! I just don't have enough words to describe to you how amazingly stunning this is! The best thing of all is your comparrison of stars to the blooming of white roses. Just for that line alone I fell in love with this poem; everything else after that nearly made my heart explode.- - - - - - - - - - ( as a side note after reading your bio): Orosn Scott Card rocks the world so hard. ^^

beautiful. i love the way the story is told and the style.

(her eyelids drugged and sluggish,blanketing brown irises heavily in dark.)- beautiful

blue liquid transparency-dazzle.

and nightmares.tah dah.

very interesting...the last stanza is gorgeous...i guess there's something wrong in the second line of the first stanza...you are telling of a time (for the only time) yet you told us of a place (is in your dreams)...maybe you could rephrase it to "for the only time i visit you is when you dream"...and the last line of the second stanza, shouldn't it be "dieting off "to" sleep?"...pls do review some of my poems...thanks...

truly yours...