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Forest of Lorien
2007-11-07
ch 1,
abuseYou let us experience a moment of pain and the angst of coming up with ways to describe it. Sometimes cliche syings are the best ways to say anything; suddenyl it does not matter if it has been said before. It helps to write it anyway. Nice job.
A Work In Progress
2006-03-07
ch 1,
abuseSome of the best work a writer can do is when they're bored and just feel like writing, when it's not forced but just flows. Loved the poem.

~aworkinprogress~ Daniel
QueenVixta
2005-12-26
ch 1,
abuseI really like this poem. Very well written and powerful. Great job! QueenVixta
Duck8
2005-11-13
ch 1,
abuseAww so sad but i like it it's good sori i can't write anything more. Go u :)
FunkyFlower16
2005-09-11
ch 1,
abuseinteresting poem. anything in specific that provoked the writing of this? nice rhyme scheme tho 2-be-honest i like ur other stuff about faith better. fascinating...great job:-) p.s hav u read the chp yet? what do u think? email me! ~mez
Nebelfee
2005-09-11
ch 1,
abuseboredom is always a good inspiration ;) This is a very good poem!
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