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| Forest of Lorien 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseYou let us experience a moment of pain and the angst of coming up with ways to describe it. Sometimes cliche syings are the best ways to say anything; suddenyl it does not matter if it has been said before. It helps to write it anyway. Nice job. |
| A Work In Progress 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abuseSome of the best work a writer can do is when they're bored and just feel like writing, when it's not forced but just flows. Loved the poem. ~aworkinprogress~ Daniel |
| QueenVixta 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem. Very well written and powerful. Great job! QueenVixta |
| Duck8 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseAww so sad but i like it it's good sori i can't write anything more. Go u :) |
| FunkyFlower16 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseinteresting poem. anything in specific that provoked the writing of this? nice rhyme scheme tho 2-be-honest i like ur other stuff about faith better. fascinating...great job:-) p.s hav u read the chp yet? what do u think? email me! ~mez |
| Nebelfee 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuseboredom is always a good inspiration ;) This is a very good poem! |