 sleeping Pisces 2005-10-26 . chapter 7Sad, full of loss.
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 sleeping Pisces 2005-10-26 . chapter 6Ah, and so you show your depression for Autumn. (You told me so in your review for my haiku, Autumn Leaf, so it was obvious). I myself was born in Autumn, so I have a strnage connection with it, though Winter my my season.
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 sleeping Pisces 2005-10-26 . chapter 5Kind of tragic and sweet mingled together. Perhaps bittersweet is the word I'm searching for.
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 sleeping Pisces 2005-10-26 . chapter 4Young love? Thats what I felt when I read this.
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 sleeping Pisces 2005-10-26 . chapter 3At first this struck me as light hearted, but then I thought about it, maybe I thought too deep.
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 sleeping Pisces 2005-10-26 . chapter 2This saddened me for all the people that live this way. Still, i felt it and for that I admire it.
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 sleeping Pisces 2005-10-26 . chapter 1Reminds me of when I used to write vampire fiction. Dark and seductive, I loved it.
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 tears from heaven 2005-10-22 . chapter 7Wow, touching piece, well done:) |
 Ang-Dev 2005-10-17 . chapter 2yep, i've reviewed already. oh well, i like this one. makes u think of ribbony patterns. awesome:-) |
 Ang-Dev 2005-10-17 . chapter 1this is absolutely awesome! hav i reviewed this be4? cant remember. i'll just review anyway. i like all 3 lines. they r absolutely beautiful. it makes u think of romance and love and passion. great job:-) |
 Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-10-02 . chapter 7this saint sebastian is quite intriguing.
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 Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-10-02 . chapter 6I can understand your thoughts on autumn but you can still find the beauty of it. in the colours of the leaves, and even just of the crisp, fiery smell of the wind.
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 Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-10-02 . chapter 5sad, yet beautiful. lonliness can do that to you.
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 Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-10-02 . chapter 4hmm, we're always hiding something, huh?
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 Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-10-02 . chapter 3how sweet. you can just sense the emotions there.
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