HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! In a few short years, you'll be a Real Person (ducks punch):)

Good chapter, too. Poor Mack, Elton John DOES stick in your head. Plus, every time I hear him I think 'you spent HOW much on a wedding reception?' then I start pondering how you can actually spend millions of dollars on feeding people. Oh well.

Ugh, poor Mackenzie:( That hurt me. I know who Harold *used* to be to her in the other story. I remember the girls, Anna and Marie, the boy, Harold and I also remember MATT (who I swore she was going to date).

The tone to this story is different, though. I like it, I like the cynicism, but I also miss Maria, who I quite adored.

Now, on another note, you do not need to review my work, missy! I know it makes you uncomfortable, so kindly quit it:) I will come back and write reviews for you, as I should be doing anyway, sooner or later. I'm the world's worst review writer.

Plus, your grammar and spelling are LIGHT years better than mine. I always get embarrassed!!

Happiness? After so much darkness? This story in general is so much darker than the first. The moods are more pronounced, more teenage-ish. Lovely:)

The description of The Outcast Crowd is magnificent. So true, too.

This is pretty interesting, I've got to say. Better than your average high school story, too, and an interesintg layout.

I can really sympathise with Mackenzie. Good thing schools around here don't have counselors.

... If I am your only fan, then so be it, but, write more than that in your next entry? Or my day will be utterly ruined.

(I've now written more in this review box than I have all day long. But, for some reason, no matter how I try to put it into words, I cannot seem to catch even the tail-end of the elusive remark I wish to leave. And, so, for now)Eccentric. [

That was really good! You've created a character that is entirely human--Funny, original, and not faultless. Keep up the good work.