well written and realistic )

I sense hatred. Hm. I just hope that it's not written about anybody I know...'cuz then I'd be kinda scared...anyways, bery well described. And I like the metaphors. And references to the sun and world. Very good! Well done! Keep up the great work (and I hope that you add onto your stories one day!)

I totally and compleatly agree... good job

Hey...I know where ya coming from, believe me...I do. It's hard to live with that type of person everyday. But, as frusterating as it is, it's not good to hate them either! They are human beings and we might as well get along with them. Give them a little respect and forgiveness and maybe they'll realize what they're doing and how it makes you feel. Keep writing, kay?

-Katja

I hate the popular kids. This was awesome, and they need to read this. It's like, open your eyes, You're not all that!