Pretty cool, I hope you continue it. I like the writing style and can see a lot of potential here. I love music, too, so that's also another cool aspect. Update soon please!

The beginning is VERY good, and the performance just draws me in to wait for the nevt chapter. Keep writing!

This is neat... the beginning is what I found really good but I think the two other paragraphs are also good.. Um.. I just wanted to thank you for leaving those realy nice reviews. It is always nice to see someone appreciate ones work. Well done!

I thought I would give this a chance. Since I liked you're poem. This is pretty good. I take it that there will be more given to the reader in chapter one. It looks good so far. I hope that you'll continue with it.