 Ryette 2009-08-28 . chapter 1I don't care that this was posted 4 years ago. It's amazing. And I love it. I also love the no-names bit- I love to read stories where the characters just don't need names.
Haha. Those little girls are gonna grow up a lot like many of us on fictionpress :)
-Ryette |
 Yandere 2009-06-16 . chapter 1That's really funny. The little sister and her friends sound so cute, and really funny. Nice story!
~Rei |
 Kell-LSC 2009-03-28 . chapter 1LOVE IT!!
Kyah!
You're an awesome, exceptional, fantabulous writer!
XDD |
 Laie 2009-01-31 . chapter 18 year old yaoi fangirls FTW!! They rock, I hope that if I ever have daughters, they turn out like this! XD |
 The-Camster 2009-01-28 . chapter 1This was just the type of thing I needed to brighten up my day! I laughed my ** off for only a minute... or five. Quite a funny little oneshot!
Keep On Writing!
~The Flying Camster |
 Electric Colours 2009-01-13 . chapter 1Words fail me.
Naahh..
BAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHA! That was freakin golddust! |
 Le1chi 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Lol highly amusing.. |
 forbiddenstars 2008-06-28 . chapter 1ahahahhahahah
OHMYKANNON ILOVEYOU!
your stories are the best stuff i've read in a while, and that's saying a lot!
you obviously have talent and from the stories you've written that i've read, you have no problem using that talent to write incredible stories. ahahahahahahah lovely. |
 Bloodfeeder 2008-06-11 . chapter 1OMG! this is hilarious!
*keels over and falls to floor while laughing so hard it HURTS* |
 Innocence of Chaos 2008-06-04 . chapter 1I love it! it's the bestest thing I've ever read! (and yes I'm aware of the painful grammar there.) WHOO! |
 Satan'z Myth 2008-05-12 . chapter 1I doubt you'd be able to count how many times this story's been called this, but it's so cute ! ^-^ But, one thing is..the boyfriends, they were a little too stiff with each other, I think, when they were alone..maybe it was because they were in public, but it would be good if you could put in a sentence or something regarding that...! |
 Lovedward48 2008-03-24 . chapter 1 Muahahahahahahahahaha! Little sisters are a pain in the **!
But that mom is a f* b*tch! I mean they're CUTE not DISGUSTING! =(
As long as they love each other she should accept it! There's nothing she can do about it anyway.
It would be awesome if you could bring a bit more detail in the kiss (and make it more passionate, muahahahahaha) The key is in detail! Not in surroundings and all that crap but in their actions ans how they make them feel! I love it though! And I was grinning like mad the whole time I was reading it! You did (again) a very good job!^^ |
 dominic+leo 2008-03-06 . chapter 1that's it? Aw... you should add to this. it's really good. please add... more people would read and review and you could do so many things with it. |
 gleee 2008-02-23 . chapter 1sque! zomfg-so-good, kinda finding it hard to breathe...
*fangirlsigh* so cute!!
thankies!! |
 Spinning Jenny 2007-09-10 . chapter 1OH. EM. GEE.
Good golly gosh, that's about as cute as a one-shot can ever get.
Fan-freak'n-tastic. Cutey to the max. Wicked to the bone. Whatever praise floats your boat.
I love this one-shot. So adorable. With the whole 'little sis and best friend yaoi fangirls' thing.
Totally lovable.
Your stuff is way spectacular,
Valentine Satiguss. |