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| Satan'z Myth 2008-05-12 ch 1,  | abuseI doubt you'd be able to count how many times this story's been called this, but it's so cute ! ^-^ But, one thing is..the boyfriends, they were a little too stiff with each other, I think, when they were alone..maybe it was because they were in public, but it would be good if you could put in a sentence or something regarding that...! |
| Lovedward48 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseMuahahahahahahahahaha! Little sisters are a pain in the **! But that mom is a f* b*tch! I mean they're CUTE not DISGUSTING! =( As long as they love each other she should accept it! There's nothing she can do about it anyway. It would be awesome if you could bring a bit more detail in the kiss (and make it more passionate, muahahahahaha) The key is in detail! Not in surroundings and all that crap but in their actions ans how they make them feel! I love it though! And I was grinning like mad the whole time I was reading it! You did (again) a very good job!^^ |
| dominic+leo 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusethat's it? Aw... you should add to this. it's really good. please add... more people would read and review and you could do so many things with it. |
| GleePiaa 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abusesque! zomfg-so-good, kinda finding it hard to breathe... *fangirlsigh* so cute!! thankies!! |
| Jenny Hatter 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseOH. EM. GEE. Good golly gosh, that's about as cute as a one-shot can ever get. Fan-freak'n-tastic. Cutey to the max. Wicked to the bone. Whatever praise floats your boat. I love this one-shot. So adorable. With the whole 'little sis and best friend yaoi fangirls' thing. Totally lovable. Your stuff is way spectacular, Valentine Satiguss. |
| toboe059 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abusethat was cute with the little yaoi fangirls and how they kissed in front of every1. it was funny too! Ha! Ha! his mother was **! the end'n was funny: "They find it exceptionally amusing. My mother doesn't. Oh, well" lol ^_^ |
| Kidiu Anaji 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseHa, I'm a little like that! I support all **'s! I like Yuri & Yaoi. |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseTake that mean mother person...who i don't really know the name of... XD |
| MistressELEMENT 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseyay i loved this it was so hilarious and cute. the young yaoi fangirls are adorable! GOOD JOB! many HUGS!, ♥ ELEMENT |
| perpetual questions 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseWhat to say? I love it. |
| i-see-faeries 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! Plain and simple amusement. Loves. |
| IndigoNightandRayneStorm 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I would so kill my mom if she was like that! Holy Cow! But I would totally be like the little girl, wanting to see them kiss, lol. Anyways, really good story, I love it! |
| Shades Of Hades 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abuseAw, his sister and her friend are future slashers! I loved it. |
| :) 2006-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abusecute! |
| iwishillwilluponyou 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abusehehe so cute ^-^ |