I loved this!

Emotionally charged and brings an extreme current of power, I enjoyed reading this.

Woah! Brilliant. So sarcastic and almost gleeful in that. well written

Like the last two lines. Good poem.

Wow, very emotional poem... Nicely written too.

this is pretty good. i like the direct way ur communicating in this and its quite touching. just dont like the 'hurting' bit. otherwise, fantastic!

~mez~

wonderful. At first I thought that the organization was a little unconventional then as I read it, I got used to it. Very nice and I totally get it.

I really like this piece. I can relate to it and it's very meaningful. I like how you have written it, it is a very powerful piece. Well done. QueenVixta

Very powerful, a little cynical...

I could say more if it weren't so good, but you've left me speechless.

very deep, powerful, and beautiful :)

wow. this is awsome.

there is something about your poems that draws me in. This made me stop and think, and I like that.

great job.

i liked this. very deep.

Because, I may be dieing, and I may be crying... dying

interesting story.. I like title & that whole idea.. I always liek the prenthesized (is that a word??) lines

so.very.sad.and.so.very.pretty.

~* noelle

interesting...