Wow. Brilliant. It's just so raw. I'd say my favorite lines, but then I'd just repeat the entire poem. Amazing...

bellisima.

a favorite.

Wow...Extraordinarily powerful. Beautiful and edgy. A brilliant job, you are a true talent.

So intoxicating and delicious. I adore it.

my god. this is beautiful. i honestly can't describe how gorgeous this is. amazing, amazing job. beautiful wording, and this poem has SO MUCH feeling. amazing. really spectacular.

Wow. This. Is. Amazing.

Please keep up the great work.

~Summer

aw...sounds like love! keep wrtiting :)

This is full of angst and passion and I have to say I really like it. The melding of words together is a bit confusing in some places, but I think it adds an alright effect.

hm... intoxicating in it's own way...

so pretty sad and well written, i muchly love this, even the format too, and im weird about formats, i dont know, excellent job

well i just read through your poetry and i like this one, i like this one a lot, i like it so much i am adding you to my favorite authors list.

sad, powerful & beautiful.. awesome piece as always.. that ending is so sad & the format is amazing

this was absolutely amazing. wow. just ... truly incredible work. i loved this -- i wish that i could leave more constructive comments, but there honestly isn't anything else to say. please, please keep writing.

I really love this, the emotion is so raw. 'and i whisperwhisper my insecurities into you' was what I liked best, though everything else was such a close second that to be honest, everything was the best. This is brilliant.

hey, I've been reading your poetry for a while now and I thoughtI should finally tell you how amazing it it. I love your unique style and this poem is yet another wonderful work of art.