This made me cry. It was really sad. That's all I can really say. Because it really made me cry.

A very very very sad story. You get the emotions across to the readers. One suggestion though, I think it's better if you give your author's note at the end and change your summary, so it would be a greater impact when the readers read about what happened to Chris.

Chills, that's what this gave me, compelete chills, i started off thinking, "what's so sad about this?" but as i kept reading i realized something was wrong and then it happened and it is, very, very sad, it was a great idea though, and the writing flowed very nicely and got right to the point of it all. well done for quite a read.

That's so cute and sad.keep on writing its a really good start!