Lovely. Sounds like the Magnificat, which is high praise indeed. Thankyou for sharing your inspiration. Aleithea

Hey, writerforever. So far I've read two of your poems and I love them! I've showed them to my friend and she seemed to love them, too. This one almost made me cry, it was so sweet and sad. I'm not a crier so I didn't, but... You'll most likely hear from me on other poems and stories as well, so see ya later.

Wow. I think Mary must've been thinking something just like this prayer. It's too bad they didn't include something like it in the Bible...Anyway, this was very nice. I like the title.

happy writing

That's excellent! It's rare you see religous poems on fictionpres, so I think this is excellent, wonderful, and beautiful. Keep it up

Did I bring this on? This is interesting to me, and of course I respect your beliefs and thoughts one hundred percent. I'm glade to see you were inspired; it really is the sincerest form of flattery.

Much love,Juliet.