Hi Sarah,

What a neat, spiffy little poem! I loved its simplicity and light rhythm. A job well done with the "little" repitition too...it makes the whole poem very cohesive and memorable! Great work!

All my best,Etherealia

P.S. Thanks for your review of my poem, "Ode to the Tree". I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Masterpiece Material, here. I like the way the words in the poem kind of blend together, with the repitition of certain phrases. Great Job!

There's such a calming effect involved and desscribed in this poem. The voice seems so serene and the words seem so real. Really great!

nice. i like the repetion of the phrase day by day. iz xx